Wednesday, 23 March 2016

Behind the doors of the girls cabins camp story portfolio post

description we did this writing to remind us of camp 
and i did a entertaining story 
Behind the doors of the girls cabins
in a camp named el rancho there is a lodge named poplar
 in that lodge there are six cabins in all six cabins there
are girls lots and lots of girl yeah thats right no boys ion
 one of those six  cabins is cabin one .the most risk taking
 most dangerous cabin of all.screaming and shouting
"ahhhh"! and the strong smell of perfume and clothes
hanging of the bunks .this message is to all the boy girls
are not as clean and tidy as you think they are . crazy girl
 running around like baby elephants. bed time is the worst
time of the day girls dont sleep like princesses in cabin one
they sleep like monkeys . one is sleep walking and the other
is sleep talking one farts and the the other burps. i wonder
who that farter is i'm going to find out now the next morning
the girls wake up clumsy and rush to there suit cases and
 get get dressed .i'm going hores riding screamed Bella i'm
going rafting shouted emily i'm going on the water slide
 screamed Jayde the next room could hear her .after the activities
were done we came back and did our camp dairy then we got ready
 for bed then it was time for bed time the all girls were asleep but not me i was
busy finding out the mystery farter it sounded like it was coming
 from the bottom
bunk it was bella that silly little girl that gas was coming from bella
Eww she stank up the whole room . all the girls had
something wrong with them
emily and jayde  snores bella farts and sleep walks
 kate m sleep talks and the reast were fine.
big idea camp
feed back feed far ward i really liked hoe drew us into the story
emily

2 comments:

  1. I like your story it is very detailed and it sounds really interesting I loved reading it and it is really clear.

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  2. I like your story it is very detailed and it sounds really interesting I loved reading it and it is really clear.

    ReplyDelete