Sunday, 28 August 2016

writing sentences slide

Description: This is my writing slide we had to do a slide about what we have been doing
in writing this term in writing. Elly was my writing coach .We are doing different sentences
 such as compound complex and adverbial sentences. Our focuses for writing was different kinds of sentences .

evaluation:i think i could have done a better job on making the sentences more intreating

feed back feed forward:I  think you could work on making you sentences make more sense
 feed back feed forward: I like that you did lots of e.g on your slide
(Sophie I)

2 comments:

  1. There was some tricky learning in this wasn't there? Well done for persevering!

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